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Open Poetry #47

Guess again, It's only me

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2011-04-04 09:29 AM

Please read again

I really clicked too soon
aiming to please
desiring accolades and
wired roses, stringing
together, I'd dared you
to adore me

Please read again

I come from whispered waves
redundant dreams
cardinal treasures, where
clouds tally and old poets
rework their epics

Please read again
I've improved, now
dot my eyes and cross
my tees

I aim to please

so please

read again

It's really me

I did not leave.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-04-04 10:11 AM

I'm liking this! I can relate and it was a fun read.
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-04-04 11:52 AM

WoW! THIS really grabbed me, EmmaRose.

~ If you don't want gays in the military, make the uniforms ugly. ~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-04-04 12:35 PM

ms ER...enjoyed this dance of your keys...

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

4 posted 2011-04-04 01:30 PM

"I aim to please"...said Hamlet to Laertes.

Good write.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2011-04-04 02:21 PM

No dare needed, I do adore this, and you.

Wonderful as always Emma.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2011-04-04 10:59 PM

I like this too ~ so, I'll just join the crowd here.

A

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2011-04-05 11:50 AM

Thanks everyone for stopping by.

So nice of you to give me your read

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2011-04-06 09:02 PM

Well written and expressed, my friend. Very much enjoyed the read.

j.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-04-07 09:51 AM

This is such an intriguing invitation, dear Poet.

Your great talent is showing.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2011-04-10 03:21 AM

exquisite and sensitive, apllause.

yann

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