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Open Poetry #47
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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2011-04-07 10:33 AM

Haiku Dreams

a lovely lady
under a fine feather-moon
in my Haiku dreams

--- b. e. adams (4/7/2011)
© Copyright 2011 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2011-04-07 10:46 AM

Hmmmmm, very nice, Bruce.  The moon is magical.

A
jwesley
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2 posted 2011-04-07 04:54 PM

Like the picture, my friend, first time I've seen it...liked your old one too.

Really like the way this piece rings but not sure I understand "haiku dreams".

But then, I don't understand a lot of things...

j.
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3 posted 2011-04-08 09:24 PM

The feather moon is a nice touch.

~Dreamy~
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