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Open Poetry #47

days like today

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-04-12 04:55 PM

i delight in
days like today
when we are alone
alone together
together alone

i will look
back later on
days like today and
remember the joy
of being loved

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-04-12 05:32 PM

. . . and they will be good memories . . .

~ At the siege of Vienna in 1683 Islam seemed poised to overrun Christian Europe. We are in a new phase of a very old war. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-04-12 05:51 PM

Short and sweet and beautifully put. I enjoyed it very much!
Lori

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2011-04-13 12:52 PM

faithmairee - Joyous moments in time come with our hope they remain indelible imprints in our memory. I enjoyed this poetic work, almost like a prayer. Namyh

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-04-13 05:04 PM

"alone together
together alone"

...you've captured the moment well...nice write

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