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Open Poetry #47

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spiked4
Junior Member

since 2006-12-07

Posts 35
Hammond, La

0 posted 2011-01-14 05:43 PM

Opened eyes
To what I can see
Visioned a future
Left the past be

Aware of the danger
Changing course
No longer looking
To live in remorse

A brand new perspective
A life in the we
No longer buried
In pains I've set free

The paths I can take
The freedom to burn
The choices to make
Are best when I learn

That all that I need
I carry inside
My strength I now feed
With pleasant reside

A take each new day
As it were the first
Clearing my way
Not seeing reverse

And join in this plan
With head held real high
All that I can stand
No longer deny

Me

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

1 posted 2011-01-16 09:01 AM

nicely worded enjoyed reading your poem.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-16 10:28 AM

This poem is full of hope. That is what I got from these words penne here.

Brought a smile to my face this morning.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

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