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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-05-14 01:43 PM

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No air there
However beautiful
Fatal morning star


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1 posted 2011-05-14 05:49 PM

I oft'times wonder
how the ancient of us
saw the stars, and their thoughts.
This make me think
and for that I thank you.
Margherita
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2 posted 2011-05-15 05:17 AM

Yes, Venus is so impressive in the morning or in the evening, so wonderfully luminous ... and yet totally beyond our reach for its inhospitableness.

Her name suggests dreams:
too hot to be visited
Venus charms our dawns

Thank you for the inspiration.

Enjoyed this much.
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