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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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hepatitis yellow streetlamp staring down out where buses don't run hiss of the subway sounds like a pit bull attack hoping buses really do run desperation staring back like long-forgotten ghosts catching buses that don't run funeral wreath hangs askew one Texas two-step before the buses run ©May 16, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-16-2011 11:00 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I don't quite get it but I liked it!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah. I just decided to put my own poem out that doesn't make sense, I see so much of this kind of lately thought I'd give it a try. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Nothing wrong with a bit of fun, Jerry. Helen |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, Helen, I guess I was just in a bad-boy mood yesterday. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Nonsense, JP...this poem does make sense. A person is waiting at a busstop It is in the middle of the night They are afraid of the city They are afraid of being alone The buss is late It doesn't come There is a struggle A dance of death (Texas two step) They are killed by a mugger.(funeral wreath) The end That's what I see in it, and I'm sticking to it..:-) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! That's just exactly how I wrote the poem, Ice. You are amazing. ~ Plastic surgeons are always making mountains out of molehills. ~ |
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