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Bas Relief |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now 
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Here, where twilight stains southern slopes and rubs the valley with cinder hand are hours fey, and transient- exhalations lilac, dogwood, plum as the city`s cinders start their soundless arabesque on distant hills do not speak, or comment- just remain where the alder holds you, face to the darkening sky so in the velvet, on the night-hawks call your private vision-quest, your mini-revelation finds you stricken, in the ordinary- cradeling May`s evening in your eye. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This speaks my kind of language and I like it. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, dear Amaryllis. So good to read you again! Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I love the uniqueness of this poem, and uniqueness is what we all strive for, but few can find. You have found it, and the verses were a delight to read. ~ 24 hours in a day ... 24 beers in a case .... Coincidence? ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
some special vibes in this... captured yet free |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Thank you so much, Alison, Margherita, Jerry (2!) and Dark, your comments are kind & make me smile  Amaryllis |
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