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grey delusions |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Seen u there twenty years back in my memory tho the clouds hid you from my mind you were transluded then and I? I was deluded you knew without knowing what was not to be known jus as I remembered what I was never told you never really left did you? just became invisible through eyes that went grey as I got old and now through the eyes of my heart I see you there again and you stay keeping my eyes from turning grey.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
love this nostalgic, class reunion kind of piece. And again, I really like your stutter-step way of writing and your expressions rank high in getting your message across. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
look backs are always healing...like a highway we get back onto after so many years of side roads...cool pen angel |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
nice work...i especially like how you ended the poem...enjoye dit much. Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely words and memories, great romance, so well expressed with tenderness, thanks yann |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanks a bunch for all of your replies I need to get on here more often!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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