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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-05-27 10:20 PM

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The old woman
An open cage

Gazing still
Into the air

For a bird
Who isn’t there


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-05-27 10:30 PM

I can picture this, and the wonderment on her weathered face, Yes, I can. I really liked this.

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jwesley
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2 posted 2011-05-28 09:04 AM

You positively Nailed this one, my friend!

j.
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