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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2011-05-28 04:52 PM

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Men remembering—
The death of friends
With closed eyes


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-05-28 06:48 PM

That is a winner. I have done that. The title makes me think that the closed eyes, in this case, are because the memories were so wonderful the eyes closed to keep from tearing.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2011-05-28 11:03 PM

Nice...James
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