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Open Poetry #47

Heartsleeve Stepped Away

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-06-03 01:34 PM

Heartsleeve
lost in thought
stepped away
in her reflection
Unaware of
the subtle shifting
insecure lurking
at her feet.
LGR(C)6/3/11

AlCowie
Member

since 2011-05-13

Posts 92
London, UK

1 posted 2011-06-03 02:01 PM

Simple yet delightfully complex, a shimmering vision, love it!

Al

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-06-03 03:31 PM

I see you're playing with those words again, Lori, and playing with them expertly in my opinion. Gotta be real careful with those reflections, sometimes they tell us da truff.

~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

3 posted 2011-06-05 10:47 PM

great job, Lori...i enjoyd this one a lot

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-06-06 05:05 AM

Dear Lori, this is very nice, that shifting can be quite intriguing.

Love,
Margherita

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