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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-06-12 08:12 AM

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And yet it plays—

His breath a breeze
On the morning sea


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ice
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1 posted 2011-06-12 09:33 PM

The fallen warrior still exists, his breath being the breeze...very nice
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