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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA
0 posted 2011-07-02 03:40 AM



I Feel You

Speechless emotions
Dancing throughout my mind
Waiting for the precise moment
For my thoughts to unwind

Looking into your eyes
I see infinite possibilities
The words forming from your sweet lips
Cause my whole body to freeze

I now close my eyes peacefully
Allowing the feelings to stream through my veins
Every part they touch, I feel you
In my afflicted mind, no longer is pain
© Copyright 2011 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2011-07-02 05:23 AM

mmmm, I love this stage of love
you write it beautifully
may it last
cherish it

~Brad
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-07-02 06:55 PM

Enjoyed...James
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-07-02 10:27 PM

Like a kiss from a child, pure.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
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