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Open Poetry #47
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2011-07-04 07:57 AM





In creamy yellow
light of dawn, tall buildings canyon
down Celestial Street.



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XGarapanX
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1 posted 2011-07-04 08:30 PM

Perfect! You've made "Ugly Urban" look beautiful again.

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easy1
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2 posted 2011-07-11 04:37 PM

Thank you, Garapan, for your kind words.

As for "dawn" and "beautiful", even in the city, I guess a lot depends upon how one has spent the night.
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-07-16 11:20 AM

Dawn spreads its magic everywhere and you captured it well.

Love,
Margherita
Word Weaver
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4 posted 2011-07-16 02:14 PM

Great ku Easy1. I don't know which delights me more, the sunrise or the sunset.


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