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Open Poetry #47

Will You Wait For Me?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2011-07-14 11:53 PM

Marry me, marry me.
Say I love you for all of life.
Play me a guitar song slow and sad.
Take me to be your wife.

But after all these years gone now
will you wait for me?
They are coming to get me
and i have big things to do, without you.

Take me to be your wife
love me forever and a day,
wait for me because I'm coming back,
I have one song to play.

I have a big thing to do,
a person to touch,
a life to save,
I want so much.

I want you.
I want this life.
I will be coming back
to settle in and be a wife.

Let me play my song.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-15 10:28 AM

I love what you are doing lately with your poetry, passing shadows. You have upped the game plan and started kicking ass. Thatsa good.

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-07-15 06:27 PM

A very touching write, that conveys very well your emotions about life's priorities.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-07-15 06:38 PM

Nice...James

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