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Open Poetry #47

A short storm

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-07-29 09:05 PM

The thunder rumbles
at nightfall, then vanishes
sub-atomic style.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

1 posted 2011-07-30 04:11 AM

Hmmm did it wake you up?

~~~kingsangel~~~

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2011-07-30 02:01 PM

LOL, it might have.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-07-31 12:58 PM

Sounds like you live in my neighborhood. We get late afternoon thunderstorms when the weather is sunny in the summer. Haven't had to worry about that this last week!

A

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-07-31 05:46 PM

Cool, short storm.
ebonygirl

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-08-02 02:42 PM

I always wondered where the term “POOF” came from…
Nice write!!

JL

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

6 posted 2011-08-02 03:58 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments.

Poets do not shoot fish in barrels, we woo them---and the barrels, too.

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