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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2011-07-30 11:05 PM




You are as close as your phone
until you hit a dead zone
and all I can get is a voice saying
"leave a message at the tone"
I know where you are staying
you're camped for the night
and everything is alright
Still, I feel so alone
without that last call home
to tell me goodnight


LGR(C)7/30/11
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2011-07-31 01:58 AM

I know just what you mean in this poem.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-07-31 07:22 AM

Thanks Ali, turned out the phone was dead and was recharging...He called about 30 minutes after I posted.  Then I was a happy camper too !
Lori
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