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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I love the way Light rests itself Upon your shoulder The way it plays softly Like loved little children In your hair I am willing To share you With light That is so obviously Someone who adores you Who am I As should deny Anything or anyone So innocent in devotion Reason for love in this world . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, John. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this... so very beautiful! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is like a Monet painted with words. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Attracted by the "Light" title I feel captivated by your most beautiful use of it in your poem. M |
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