Lucky Bamboo - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #47

Lucky Bamboo

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2011-08-24 09:34 PM

Lucky Bamboo

The darkness
Long leaves reach up to the sky
Even here life thrives

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-08-24 10:17 PM

Love the visuals. Very nice, Juju~

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2011-08-24 11:42 PM

Power packed with minimal wordage...nice! I enjoyed your poem.

Miscellanea

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-08-25 12:57 PM

Nice write.

JL

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-08-25 12:24 PM

And you can almost hear and see it grow ...

Wonderful!

Love,
M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-08-25 12:38 PM

enjoyed!
Lori

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

6 posted 2011-08-25 01:18 PM

Lovely haiku Juju.

Marcia
www.thewritingforum.net

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-08-25 05:42 PM

Very nice...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2011-08-25 07:20 PM

Lovely.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.