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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2011-08-26 02:20 PM

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Snow
Is falling

The whole world
Is white and blue

Water in a river
Not yet frozen
Flows under
A wooden bridge

In a long wool coat
You walk in the park
I reach out and take
Your hand

You close your eyes
Your face beams light
Who are we now
In what paradise

I don’t know
Why we bother
To talk at all


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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-08-26 02:22 PM

"I don’t know
Why we bother
To talk at all"

Nice write!!
JL


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-08-26 03:16 PM

Beautiful memory with a sad ending. The scenery made me think of some Russian novels ...

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2011-08-26 06:09 PM

Sounds enticing...James
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
4 posted 2011-08-26 07:06 PM

I like this alot.
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
5 posted 2011-08-26 10:43 PM

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Thank you all


John


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