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Open Poetry #47

Peaches

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-08-31 01:27 PM

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Asleep
All weight
Falls to zero

White wine
Blue cheese
Rustling leaves
Of summer

A small rowboat
With wooden oars
We are bound to where
Those dreams of ours
Glide young and green
Beside a pebbled shore

Water ripples
Along the bow
I can see them
As we draw near

There’s nothing more
We need to fear
Together we’re going home

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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-08-31 01:32 PM

"Water ripples
Along the bow
I can see them
As we draw near

There’s nothing more
We need to fear
Together we’re going home"

Amazing write.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-09-05 02:27 AM

I agree with JL. Amazing write.

A

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-09-05 02:58 AM

A joy to read, John.
ida

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