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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-09-04 09:23 AM

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You find
Your peace
In the park

A walk in space
That is blank

White
Its ground and
Leafless branches
Heaped with
Falls of snow

It is to yourself
You think
A kind
Of memorial
Your life
As it should have been

And yet what
Have you ever done
Esthetic sufferer
As could have made you
A friend to that courageous man

You
Who sterilely wanders
Apart
From door to door

In a world
Where you
And only you
Would rule

.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-04 02:31 PM

"You
Who sterilely wanders
Apart
From door to door

In a world
Where you
And only you
Would rule"

Nice write. Especially the last two verses.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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