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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-09-07 08:20 AM

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Lost in thought
Through lambent blue
A snowy moon


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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-07 09:38 AM

Love it! Lost in thought, but ever so aware of the surrounding beauty!

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easy1
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2 posted 2011-09-08 05:08 AM

I think that both of your "September" poems on the first page here are good, though I like this one better. The lambent ambience (or ambiance) of a snowy moon scene is well-imagined. Autumn and Winter are on the way...
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