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Open Poetry #47

Joy

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

0 posted 2011-01-20 05:52 PM

Joy flows through me like never before.
Eerie sensations run wild like a cold chill,
Numbing limbs, rushing heart, freezing brain.
Nervousness over comes me, showing thy colors.
Already I have lost control, so quick to flow.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-01-20 07:24 PM

OH! I can feel the flow of this one. Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2011-01-20 07:46 PM

Are you having love addiction symptoms?

Great wording in this..

Eric

two maggots were fighting in dead earnest!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-20 08:25 PM

Like Eric I sensed an outbreak of love in your lines, because it will do every bit of that to you.

~ Clones are people two ~

Elric
Junior Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 43
southbend, WA

4 posted 2011-01-21 01:14 AM

Actually no, I love the thought of being in love, but I'm not really in love with anybody at the moment.

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