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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2011-09-18 10:07 AM

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Ah
What an unrepentant
Secret jerk I am

At your age
Keeping distance
I get the best of you
For free

There should be
Sinful wine
Beside my view

As I watch
With pleasure
Passing by

An image of beauty
You and you alone
Burdened with your realities


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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2011-09-18 10:25 AM

Excellent.

We humans are from a certain age always in rut, even when the ruts become too deep. Perhaps it is a little joke played upon us for the nonce in this sojourn world.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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2 posted 2011-09-18 01:01 PM

This brings an approving smile ...  

Its truth resonates with me.

M
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