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Open Poetry #47

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flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-22 06:31 AM

pumping iron--
a grimace only Picasso
could capture

dining alone--
playing footsies
with a table leg

moving up north--
again, I pack the china
we never use

autumn twilight
an old cat chasing birds
with his eyes

--Al

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-22 12:06 PM

Heeheeee...

This is really good.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2011-09-22 03:34 PM

Enjoyed, flash,
ms. e

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-09-22 03:42 PM

It is always a pleasure to read you.
Lori

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-09-22 04:37 PM

You capture the nuances of life in such a captivating way, dear Al.

Bravo!

M

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

5 posted 2011-09-22 06:34 PM

JL, Lori, Ms e, Margherita; Thanks you ALL for your generous comments & I'm so pleased you were able to dervive some enjoyment from my senryu/haiku.

I will try to write more,

Al

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