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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2011-09-22 08:35 AM

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Lines of clouds
Pale blue dawn
Geese flying


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JL
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1 posted 2011-09-22 12:04 PM

You paint it well.

Enjoyed.

JL

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2 posted 2011-09-22 12:21 PM

Oh, I've found the geese.  There are 2 separate poems called Late September.  The other is lovely, but this is my favourte Late September.

Owl
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