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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-01-21 08:07 AM


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Your kids at school
The curtains closed—
Winter moon


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-01-21 09:22 AM

As we came home last night after supper,
the winter moon was low, as huge as I
have ever seen, and quite naturally a
reddish-orange...

It was simply beautiful!
steavenr
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2 posted 2011-01-21 12:29 PM

kids all gone
pants are too--
longed for loneliness

...oh, btw, nice write...its brevity and its insights
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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3 posted 2011-01-21 01:02 PM

Beautifully written. I loved the imagery.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb
Huan Yi
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4 posted 2011-01-21 01:24 PM

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Thank you all


I actually like this myself
because it can have so many
understandings

Thanks again


John


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