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September Autumn
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September Autumn |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A leaf falls Through cool blue air A squirrel’s cry . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice view of the coming of Autumn. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A cool breeze choreographs the leave's last dance. You just inspired me. Beautiful, dear John. M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely! I hope it was a happy cry. I have just realised that I don't know what any of the calls of a squirrel sounds like. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice. Can see the falling leaf and hear the chattering of that squirrel. Nice again. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It is still very warm here but I can still feel autumn in the air. your poems confirm it. ida |
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