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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-01-21 02:28 PM

I
Demanding
Constantly curious
Of whims and fancy
I dress up in mother clothes
And dance a parody
‘round reality
I slip out of shoes
That never really fit
And wiggle bare toes
In the muck
A playground sky
Scattered with clouds
Toys for my imagination
Sweet breezes caress
Tender nodding from the trees
They bounce shadows
On a lonely wall
Making faces
Making friends
Out of thin air
And silence

(repost)

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-21 02:36 PM

I got this. I got all of this. Uh huh, got it.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-01-21 02:46 PM

I'm so glad you did Jerry, it works so much better that way.

Lori

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2011-01-21 03:19 PM

I love this...it is so elegantly constructed...flows well into its perfect ending...kudos

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-01-21 03:22 PM

Steven thank you for your very generous compliments!
Lori

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-01-21 05:10 PM

"I slip out of shoes that never really fit."
Love it. Really feel this one, Lori.
Ida

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

6 posted 2011-01-21 08:33 PM

Well, I... and then there was... and, oh yeah... what they said!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-01-22 12:01 PM

Ida, thanks for your kind words

Garapan-oh yeah...thanks for what you said...er...um...they said.

Lori

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-01-22 12:43 PM

Very beautiful, but lonely-sad.

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-01-22 12:47 PM

Thanks Owl, that time was.
Lori

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2011-01-22 02:15 PM

self-imposed silence for me at the moment~~ But I got a chuckle out of the responses

M

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

11 posted 2011-01-22 06:50 PM

a sad and moving poem...elegantly penned

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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