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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Still your hands In the way they move Your face Lifted to the sky The slow swaying As if sun and moon Were joining you Wishing to share your joy A breeze yet writes Your music upon the lake Whose water ripples The notes your blue eyes sing And here I am again Happy silent company Watching you dance Under autumn’s falling leaves . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Possibly, John, in my humble opinion, your most beautiful poem, yet. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A breeze yet writes Your music upon the lake Whose water ripples The notes your blue eyes sing So peaceful... so beautiful!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with OwlSA, my friend, but then, I've felt like that about a number of yours... j. |
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