| Open Poetry #47 |
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After Snow |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
After Snow Yellow disk through gray above early fallen snow--- shovels scrape the tune. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Pretty soon, easy, pretty soon the "yellow disk" will show through the gray. enjoyed |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Visualized it well, right down to the sound of snow shovels. Excellent write. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Great job! Captured perfectly! Lori |
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