Sigh-soft Touch of Dusk and Dawn

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Open Poetry #47

Sigh-soft Touch of Dusk and Dawn

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-10-17 02:45 AM

SIGH-SOFT TOUCH OF DUSK AND DAWN
17 October 2011

I felt your love-kiss
whisper-soft
on the tender of my forehead
as I lay me down to sleep
perchance to dream of you
in the ache of my inner-heart

and yes, that butterfly-breath
that caressed your lips
and smiled your eyes open
this grey-heart morning
in the velvet of the dawn
was my kiss-soul wish
for a sweet-remembering day
for you.

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-10-17 06:29 AM

I like this, it is very loving.

Lori

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-10-17 08:00 AM

Thank you, Lori. Smiles.

Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-10-17 10:27 AM

was my kiss-soul wish
for a sweet-remembering day
for you.

This is so gentle and loving...

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-10-17 06:22 PM

Thank you, Ruth. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Owl

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