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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
0 posted 2011-10-22 09:07 PM


You sit so near always here,
a vast distance is always there.
Spoken words I have read
when laying in bed.
A penned letter I did see
incised so delicately. I was
so staggered when I did read
of your fervor towards me.
I must acknowledge my feelings for thee
these ardent feelings have a hold of me.
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-22 09:46 PM

Ah, yes indeed, turn about is fair play I have always heard. Nice writing . . .

~*  If they give you lined paper, write the other way.  ~*~
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2011-10-23 10:36 AM

You thoughts are loving and sincere.
Great poem Elric,  this whispers softly to my heart.
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