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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2011-10-29 11:04 AM

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I sit at dawn
Old man
Smoking a pipe

Without comment
Save this poem

Watching
Even that most

Beloved
Of those loved
Pass into night

As if
As always
All along
Expected


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-10-29 12:18 PM

Maybe it is always expected, but the thought is removed until it happens.

I agree.

Poignant.

M
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