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Open Poetry #47

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-08 10:08 AM

Am craving something
I can’t quite put my hands on
Could you come closer

LGR©11/8/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-08 10:53 AM

Ah, we have Lori riddles this morning, eh? You do have way of giving the mind things to think of.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-11-08 11:09 AM

Thanks Jerry, Did my poem reach out and grab you? LOL

Lori

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2011-11-08 02:31 PM

Oooo, that's very, very coy! I'd like to use that line sometime!

Linda

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

4 posted 2011-11-08 03:57 PM

sexy

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-11-08 04:48 PM

Careful.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2011-11-08 05:12 PM

Yup, it just got ten degrees hotter in here.

Nicely done.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-11-09 08:25 AM

Hey thanks everybody for your comments to my suggestive senyru. Your replies make it fun.

Lori

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