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Open Poetry #47

Perfect Pain

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-01-25 09:46 AM

Words flow from fingertips
tapping out perfect pain
Irresistible reads
too hard on my heart
Inevitable
I will bleed

LGR©1/25/11

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-01-25 09:52 AM

Inevitably so.

But it is good when we can relate,
knowing we are not alone.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2011-01-25 11:38 AM

Nice poetry.

~ Good health is merely the slowest possible rate at which one can die. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-01-25 11:45 AM

Tis true Sunshine.
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Thanks Jerry

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steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-25 12:49 PM

there is a beautiful sadness here...well penned...I'll be re-reading this one for sure

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-25 03:48 PM

i love how genuine and unique your work is... i look forward to each new poem you write

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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