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Open Poetry #47

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-30 10:11 AM

My discouraged
draped heavy
o’er my shoulders
shadows my hopeful heart
Trickling tears
move my melancholy
downriver of my reverie

LGR©11/30/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-30 10:15 AM

Not a good sign, Lori, hoping for better days ahead. You do these kind of sad poems so well.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-11-30 10:28 AM

Thanks Jerry, I've had lots of practice.

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-11-30 11:01 AM

You do have a way with words. Nicely expressed emotion.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-11-30 11:11 AM

Thank you JL. I appreciate it very much.

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2011-12-05 09:17 AM

So sad
like a downpour of tears
on the heart's shoulder

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-12-05 11:00 AM

Thanks EmmaRose! Good to see you!

Lori

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