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Open Poetry #47

To love is heaven...

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-12-03 10:01 AM

On seraphim wings
My heart took flight
To love once more
To feel alive
Can't be denied
Angelic trumpets
Ring out with song
The moments of silence
My heart's delight
I gaze upon you
Your skin sparkling
In the soft candlelight
To speak of your beauty
No words come to mind
If heaven is reality
I finally found my faith
As I take hold
Of your hands
Gently kiss your lips
Holy rapture
Is within my grasp...

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-03 10:16 AM

Absolutely delightful, dear Jean-Philippe!

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-12-03 10:32 AM

“If heaven is reality
I finally found my faith”

“Holy rapture
Is within my grasp...”

Heaven is reality, in my opinion, the only truth.
And it is without a doubt, in my mind, at the door.
It is closer than you might think.
But of course I took advantage of your verbiage to bend my
reply to preach…
(Alles wat we moeten doen is geloven).

Really enjoy your poetry!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-12-03 11:26 AM

Ah, I see that you, also, are not confined within the dark when it comes to writing intelligent poetry. Good. Too many people settle on one phase of writing and never vary.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-12-03 11:36 AM

Yep, really good...gotta go, gotta read

Lori

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