numerical senryu x3 plus 1 haiku

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Open Poetry #47

numerical senryu x3 plus 1 haiku

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-12-15 10:19 AM

Cowboy Sky

Typhoon Ruby soar:
Arches in the sky: Cowboy
707.

...

Christmas '91

Christmas '91
they stalked me to Ridley Park
7-11.

...

86'd

86'd---I tried
to tell them they'd be punished,
but they wouldn't hear.

***

Winter sunlight slants
across the white curtain's dust
light from a lantern.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-15 05:08 PM

The three senryu are cryptic to me, but I understand the haiku, dear Mark, and I think it is most vividly impressive.

Margherita

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