How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » December
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic December Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2011-12-16 08:54 AM

.


Wooden eaves—
A few brown reeds
Rising from the snow


.
© Copyright 2011 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-12-16 09:06 AM

Perfect word picture.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2011-12-16 12:56 PM

Beautifully contemplative.

Margherita
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2011-12-17 01:42 AM

Minimalism at its best, painting a picture that grips.

Owl
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » December

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary