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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2011-12-21 11:45 AM

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The snow
Comes down
Slowly

Out there
Beyond any actual
Window there are
Figures moving
Across the eye

They glimmer
In winter’s shadows
Some are playing
In a neighborhood
Left behind

How sad
And full of love
It is

To see them
Unforgotten for all
That has happened
Regardless
Of present time

A friend gestures
In mutual recognition

That one who was
The whole world
Sun moon and stars
Waves goodbye


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-12-22 04:47 AM

Excellent.

Margherita
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