| Open Poetry #47 |
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Shoodle-Doodles |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
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shoodle-doodles danced into the belly of sunlit beams while segregated panes warmed them and Sunlight imprisoned them forever - Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (01-14-2012 06:08 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Rich in imagination. You have captured those "shoodle doodles" so well, Alison. Ida |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, dear Ida. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ali-san...not sure how to respond...just pretend I said something clever [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-13-2012 08:48 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I can visualize this spectacle of light and love to linger in its warmth. A celestial cupcake, ecco! Hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
love how this lights up the page~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ah-Ha! I remember Shoodle-Doodles from "The Kitchen Table" Which you posted a few years ago. I also remember trying to find the definition of a Shoodle-Doodle. Had me smiling then, and now. Enjoyed!! Too darn cute... JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark - you are always clever. Thank you. ms ali-san |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful Margherita - I know you always see beauty ... Or do it seems. This makes you very special to me. xoxoxo Alison |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Baby Girl ~. Thank you so so much!!! A |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dear JL ... Wow! How did you EVER remember "The Kitchen Table" & the Shoodle-Doodles? You deserve to hear the story, my dear friend When I was a baby I would sit in the sun beam that came through the window. I would try to catch the dust that danced in the light. I called them Shoodle-Doodles. So see - this is an original Alison word. Thank you - you brought me much joy today! Xoxoxo Alison ~ lover of Shoodle-Doodles |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
NO! You brought ME joy with that cute little story. Thank you for sharing. ![]() JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I...was hoping the definition of shoodle-doodles would come out in the replies. What a truly awesome word. This made me feel the sun, and match it in like kind with a smile. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I could see this clearly in my mind as I read. Almost a deja vu effect.I'll admit the title had me thinking of snicker doodles dancing into my belly before I read the poem, though. Nicely done. Michael |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
JL ![]() A - Nicole Thank you from my heart. xoxoxo A - Michael, My very favorite cookies are Snickerdoodles. They are the first cookie I learned to bake. Loved them so much I named my first cat Snicerdoodle when I was five. Thank you so much! xoxoxo A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Haahaaahaaaa! A, You are hypnotizing me with that spinning smiley face... You're the Egg McMuffin® of poetry. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the name and love the poem (and love snickerdoodles, too! LOL) This is a smile maker! *S* |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And Shoodle-Doodles, Snickerdoodles and I love you too, suthern! xoxoxo A |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
JL Look into my eyes. Look into my eyes .. Look into .. ![]() MY EYES ![]() A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
((( )))---------------- JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love dust motes... they have a life that only Horton might hear, yet they sparkle for all... ![]() ![]() |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I like your new word. Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Who? Horton? As in Horton hatches a Who? Love it, Karilea. xoxoxo A - Ms E My language is sprinkled with Alison words. Thank you for enjoying. xoxo A |
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