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Open Poetry #47

Just a Suggestion

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-18 01:12 PM

Just a suggestion
is all it takes
to put my mind
exploring possibilities
of unexplored places
Familiar finds traces
of nuanced expression
Ecstasy sensation
a destination find
responding to
the suggestive
of you

LGR©1/18/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-01-18 01:17 PM

And if he can't understand THAT he's a dunce. Good stuff, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-01-18 01:20 PM

Suggestive is as suggestive does my friend

Thanks for dropping in

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2012-01-18 01:46 PM

sometimes just a suggestion will suffice
a while
I liked this subtleness

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-01-18 02:02 PM

Thanks EmmaRose!

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-01-20 01:26 AM

Nice write Lori...
Enjoyed your suggestion.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2012-01-20 03:28 AM

wonderful!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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