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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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docile feathers followed over the hill and the anguish of yesterday's uncertainty is valor now: immersion in clouds ----------------- ----------------- ..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Ram ----------------- |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is beautiful. I don't understand it, but then one doesn't need to understand poetry to love it. My guessed interpretation is that a bird who became prey to a predator, after his brave fight for his life, is victorious in Heaven. I am probably completely off-track on that. Owl |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
docile feathers followed over the hill and the anguish of yesterday's uncertainty is valor now: immersion in clouds --------------- ..Owl>>it is a poem about a bird learning to fly--"docile" implies: willing to learn..well, one day it follows over the hill, next day it is daringly immersing itself into clouds..thanks..>>spiros |
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