Maybe Next Time (repost) for Last Letter Challenge

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Open Poetry #47

Maybe Next Time (repost) for Last Letter Challenge

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2011-01-31 01:33 PM

A tiny light fairy
dances on the dark surface
of my disappointment.
Her name is Hope.
The dance ends
She bows
and whispers...
"Maybe next time."

Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (01-31-2011 09:08 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-31 01:54 PM

Ida! Love it! I'm so glad you reposted this little gem.
Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2011-01-31 04:46 PM

Smiling at what you brought back for us to enjoy!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2011-01-31 07:31 PM

Ida...this gave me goosebumps...so lovely and sad

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-01-31 08:11 PM

Ida-You've said so much in so few words. I love your poem...i think it's great!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-31 08:57 PM

what better quote is the embodiment of the persona of hope than the one you have attributed to it...excellent write

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2011-01-31 11:18 PM

Your poem is a fragile one, and yet it holds so much promise.

Nice spin, Ida~

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

7 posted 2011-02-01 09:02 PM

sweetly said in few words. enjoyed. jo

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2011-02-02 12:06 PM

Delightful, Ida! Superbly portrayed.

Owl

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