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Open Poetry #47
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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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0 posted 2011-02-02 01:22 AM

You are in a sea of the unaware
My eyes lock on you
Your eyes meet mine through the air
Let me catch a glimpse of her

Looking through your love
He has taken your heart
Let me have your soul
I want to lift it up
I want to make you aware
Each night i dream of you
The hands you have are my dream
© Copyright 2011 Jared Copeland - All Rights Reserved
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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1 posted 2011-02-05 02:07 PM

This is very beautifully written. I would like to have that dream. I enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb
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