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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2011-02-17 10:29 AM

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Dream this time
We’ll miss the thorns

Face to face
Carrying you off
Like a young girl

So light your arms
Along my shoulders

Your legs
Upon my hips


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1 posted 2011-02-17 11:54 AM

there's a sweet melancholy painted in this wish-it-could-be scene...an extremely enjoyable read
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2 posted 2011-02-20 12:23 PM

John,

I like this.  

Alison
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