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Open Poetry #47

Matchstick Girl

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2011-02-22 10:21 PM

Matchstick Girl

Sometimes the dawn arrives late
And I no longer grasp light
Within the narrow wavelengths
Once visible to my heart

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2011-02-22 10:25 PM

this is lovely~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-02-23 04:03 PM

understand this, that's for sure...enjoyable read

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2011-02-23 05:13 PM

I love that opening line.

(I can't resist the urge to confide that once upon a time, my dawns arrived so late I was told that they were actually sunsets.)

Your mind is lovely as well.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2011-02-23 10:17 PM

Yeah I got this fairy tail stuck in my head and well I wrote a short poem...

Probably one of the most depressing fairy tail ever. I can't believe my mom told me these stories no wonder I am a drama queen!!!! Couldn't remember the name so I just summarized who the girl was in the title

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2011-02-27 06:51 PM

I remember this story - and I really like your poem.

Alison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2011-02-27 07:03 PM

Enjoyed...James

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2011-03-04 08:38 PM

This conveys much emotion in its short expression.

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