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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Susan is naughty Being happy This is a great sin She is smiling At humor There is laughter And Susan Wicked Susan Covers her face With slender hands . |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The image of a giggling girl in the library is so vivid. I remember the rigid decorum, the library so hushed it felt sacred as church. I couldn't help smiling at the mirth, it was so visible! ~K |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, Go head Wicked Susan. I like this. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
well expressed, I love the atmosphere, the character of susan. thanks for the enjoyable read. yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Susans with wicked smiles seem appropriate for libraries. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
It depends on how long she keeps it up. Even libraries have social contracts. I daresay there is a movie script in this one somewhere. |
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